I am having a tough time deciding between this one and the navy combination. I think this red and black one seems more formal?? I made a quick sample using me and my husbands info as a quick sample, so the details are not accurate. Thank you ladies for noticing, I will change the mistakes before showing the bride to be.
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Registered: April 20, 2005 Location: Rochester, MN Posts: 207
Tue, May 02, 2006 @ 1:33 PM
I vote the red one. There is more contrast and the vellum is easier to read. They are both lovely - and you can't miss no matter which one you choose. The stamp is absolutely perfect for a shower invite.
Registered: June 12, 2004 Location: Missouri City, Texas Posts: 432
Tue, May 02, 2006 @ 1:54 PM
Great invite. I vote for the red as well it just looks so much better. Have fun with the shower. Great job!
Registered: December 7, 2004 Location: Posts: 1763
Tue, May 02, 2006 @ 2:10 PM
I am wondering what color the bride is using in her wedding......is it red? I like the red one over the navy one, but would use the color she is using for her wedding. The invitation is really pretty, and very sophisticated. One other comment......please, do not think I am being critical....just trying to help.....
Should this read...."honoring" not honouring?
Also, write out the word "one" instead of using the numeral "1" since you have spelled out "o'clock" . (example, One O'clock)
Good luck to you!
Registered: March 22, 2004 Location: Hmmmm...? Posts: 4235
Tue, May 02, 2006 @ 2:16 PM
Do the bride and groom have the same last name, without being married?
Registered: April 18, 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 115
Tue, May 02, 2006 @ 2:23 PM
You are right it should read "honoring" oops!! I just made a quick sample invite using my and my husbands info since she has not decided on a date yet. I didn't even realize I used my married name, I haven't used my maiden name is sooo long!! lol!! At least you guys are paying attention! Thank you for your great input and sharp eyes!
Registered: October 29, 2004 Location: Rhode Island Posts: 1126
Tue, May 02, 2006 @ 6:21 PM
Love it - will have to put in my fav file! - I agree with the above comments!! It should read "One O'clock in the Afternoon" - for proper invitation wording, and both the "at" should not be capitalized. I would write out the year instead of the numbers and add the address of the Club. But that is just me - I usually go to invitation sites to check out the way that the printers word invites for anything formal - I find that they really helps! Hope the bride-to-be LOVES IT!!!