I was wondering if you all could critique this card. It is for my step-daughters graduation and I really want to make it special. Too much white, too busy, too? I used the MM paint for the first time and may have got a little wild. Maybe instead of Life - enjoy the journey I should randomly stamp words like achieve, dream --. So what do you think?
Date: Thursday, May 19, 2005 GMT Views: 1683
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Thu, May 19, 2005 @ 9:09 AM
I do not think there is too much white. Nor do I think it is too busy. I think the sentiment on the front is very nice.
I don't know what the MM paint is.
Do you have a metal embellishment you could add? A black or antique silver would be a good color, possibly. A swirly paper clip peeking out of the green edge would add something. I would stay with the circle motiff. Don't add something square or another shape.
I think it is nice as is, but you wanted suggestions, so here are mine. I would not add words randomly.