Opinions needed please
 

We have some friends and relatives coming from out-of-town for DS's Bar Mitzvah next weekend. I thought I would do a little gift basket for each room and ask the hotel to put them in the rooms (which they usually do). I'm thinking water bottles with the Crystal Light to go pouches attached, microwave popcorn, maybe some trail mix.

Here's a little poem I wrote to go with it. What do you think - too goofy? :rolleyes:
We know it's very tiring
To travel so many miles.
Having you here to share our joy
Will bring us many smiles.

Perhaps you're tired and hungry
And wishing for a snack.
So open me up and have a nosh
While you settle and unpack.

Some water for the "thirsty"
Some trail mix for the "sweet"
Some pretzel mix for the "munchy"
We hope you enjoy this treat.

So rest and relax
And have good night.
We'll see you tomorrow
All chipper and bright!

So cute! Who wouldn't LOVE this! You are such a generous hostess!

NOT Goofy. Thoughtful, sweet and cute. (probably tasty too)

I like it! Maybe include a small city map?

I love it! Your guests will be delighted. Enjoy your son's day.

My brother did something similar for his out of town wedding guests. He also included some coffee from a nearby cafe (something different than they would get at home). You could also do candy bars (with stamped wrappers of course).

Very cool idea. Nice thoughtful poem. I think it is great.

You are so sweet to go to this extra effort to make your guests feel at home. This poem is great - go for it!

Not goofy at all. Very thoughtful. My neice did something like this for the out of town guests who came to her wedding. Enjoy!

What a great idea! The poem is really cute!

Very cute. And congrats on your daughter's bat mitzvah!

what a great idea! I think it is cute! Your guests will surely appreciate it!

Mazel Tov!! I LOVE your idea and I know your guests will appreciate the thoughtfullness. Your poem is precious.

Totally not goofy......would love to find that in my room after a long trip. That's just an awesome idea!!!!!!!!!!