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Old 03-14-2019, 10:17 AM   #1  
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I wrote a card verse for my granddaughters card, which version do you like better?

1. Today you’ve turned 14
It’s your day to be a queen
Wishing you a day that’s not routine
Sending you love & kisses…
The most you’ve ever seen!


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Today you deserve to live like a queen,
A young lady whose reached the age of fourteen.
I hope your day isn't boring routine,
But with more love and kisses than ever you've seen.
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I like the second one.
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Old 03-14-2019, 10:33 AM   #3  
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I like the first one.
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I like the second one. I love that you wrote these for your granddaughter! That is so meaningful and sweet.
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I like them both, but the first a little better.
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I like the 2nd ("whose" should be either "who's" or "who has")
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I like the 2nd one slightly more, but they are both great!
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I like the second verse, seems to have a better rhythm when you say it.
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I'm with Heidi, I prefer the first one. So I guess it comes down to you use the one you prefer!
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