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Old 11-08-2012, 11:58 PM   #294
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Kathy, it's a lovely card & has all the right elements. The one thing that I really noticed is that the stamped elements feel too spread out, especially the crib which looks to be "falling" off the page. I did a little study into print design & it's better to leave a little more space at the bottom of the page to avoid that look.

Perhaps have the patterned paper shorter, so that there is more of the red layer top & bottom & more in proportion to the sides. (sorry, that's such an unwieldy sentence; I hope you understand what I mean )

I'm also not sure about the sentiment being so centred - though by Sabrina's comment, above me, she may well disagree
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